Okay, I pulled this one out of the back of the closet (Ha!) I shined it up a little bit, but as with the rest of them, it's still pretty rough.
I will braid your hair
For an excuse to run my
Fingers down your spine
We will forget by morning
That we ever had the desire
To explore each other's bodies
And we will not blame
Honest attraction, but
Instead, the beer, and wine
And go back to the party
The beginning and middle are stronger than the ending. The ending needs to be said, of course, but might be stronger with a little tinkering. Great stuff here.
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